Tag: Writing

Hi bloggers.

I’d say some of you have watched The Black Hole.
(Under writing, session 3 on the Kauri Team site)

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Bleach curiously stepped forward, her talons rapping the floor, folding her wings in.
She poked her snout into the hole.
She cocked her head, and whispered wistfully, “Your cup is inside, Thomas. It is broken.”
Tom cocked his head, and inched slowly towards the paper.
“I’ve seen snails go slower, Tom.” Bleach whispered.
Tom rolled his eyes, and walked to the printer, scowling, “Ok, mystical voice!”
He cautiously lowered his hand in, and looked sheepishly around.
“Can-can you tell me what this is, voice?” Tom mumbled.
“I have a name. Bleach. Queen of the Dream Dragons. And, I do not know. I did not see this in your future.” Bleach whispered, scratching her chin thoughtfully.
Tom nodded, whispering, “Okay, Bleach.”
Then, suddenly, Tom leapt in.
“BELLE?!” He cried.
Bleach smiled, closing the portal with her talons.
Obviously, she knew he’d be happier with her.
With Belle.

Not part of my story:
This story is about a boy named Tom. When he turns seven, his sister leaves for high school. Months later, she calls. She turns up on the call bald. She had been diagnosed with cancer, and was calling to say goodbye. Permanently.  Bleach continues to watch Tom grow up.
One day, Tom goes into a coma, and falls into a deep sleep for years.
Bleach is his dragon. She sends him his dreams, or his nightmares.
Bleach is Queen of the Dream Dragons, and was sent to look after Tom.
One day, Tom arrives to his office to find a black hole.
After he accidentally drops his cup in, Bleach decides to speak to him for the first time.
She sends him closer to the hole, and opens the portal to La tierra de los muertos – The Land Of The Dead.
Tom and Belle were reunited.
And that, is my story.

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I added a description of the story, because you haven’t read the entire story.
Did you like the small snippet of the story?
Would you like to read the entire story (I can’t do that, it’s just a question)
Blog you later,
Lusia.

Hi bloggers!

This week and last, we’ve done La Luna writing.
I’ve been absent all of last week, and on Wednesday.

A snippet of my writing:
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Poppa pulled out a music player. He clacked an old CD into the player, and music blasted out of the player. He did a small jig, humming the entire time. Peter turned red with embarrassment, rolling his eyes all the same. ‘I wonder what Mum’s doing… Wait- What if someone’s attacked her?!’ Peter thought worriedly. He pulled out a piece of paper from his pocket and scrawled the thought onto the paper. He looked sadly at it, then crumpled it up and threw it onto the ground of the boat. His face softened slowly.
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Do you like it?

Blog you later,
Lusia

Hey bloggers!

Yesterday, we did writing and I came up with a sentence I really like!
Here it is: Sarah was a kite in a warm summer breeze as she floated around gently, sweeping pearl white feathers off the dusty floor.

The picture the piece of writing was inspired by:

Any feedback?
Blog you later,
Lusia

Hi! Today we finished out After Work writing! Here is my story:

Olivia was new to crime-fighting and was currently wearing a batman suit, because of a play, with her older sister Alyssa as Robin. They moved to New York a year ago. Ring ring…Ring ring…Ring ring… There was a call from the phonebox on the corner. Olivia watched as no one went to the phone box. She answered. “Hi, this is Olivia Wilson.” Olivia said confidently. “Hey, Olivia! Maris Wilson’s on the phone” Olivia immediately knew who was calling, and raced home. Olivia had left the phone. “Hello? Olivia?” Maris asked, confused. Their puppy had turned into a… human? Maris shook hands with Olivia, as she stood there, dumbstruck. “Nice to finally speak to you, Miss” Maris grinned. He stood up, and opened the fence. “I’m off to do some… stuff” Olivia and Alyssa ran to follow Maris. Maris broke into a bank, and stole money. “Typical…” Olivia whispered. Maris then stole something from the museum. “Another classic…” Olivia muttered. Maris acted quite odd the next few days. He was plotting, they all knew it. He kidnapped all the pets in New York and turned them all into humans! That night, Maris slept quite early, so Alyssa made a plan. She pulled her notebook out, and began sketching. She sketched a gun… “A gun, to-” Alyssa began “No. Violence.” Olivia snapped. She hates violence. “It’ll turn Maris back.” Alyssa sighed. She made the gun quickly, then whispered “I think I’ll test the gun on you”. Olivia forced a frown and said “No way, Alyssa-” too late. Olivia turned into a bunny, her spirit animal. She leapt around the room happily, while Alyssa crept into Maris’s room, where he was sleeping. She switched Maris back into a dog… With 3 eyes? Something backfired. Olivia nervously looked at her body, finding out she had 6 tails. She silent-screamed. Alyssa hurriedly found the problem, fixed it and turned Olivia human. Olivia whispered “Maris is waking…” He was! Alyssa quickly turned him into a normal dog. He woke up with a bark, but conked out. Later, they returned everything. Olivia tickled Maris’s neck, and shook hands with Maris, as a dog. He had already shook hands, so it was easy for him. Alyssa was relieved her sister was happy again. “Another day, another crime.” Alyssa said proudly. “Yep!” Olivia agreed. It was true. The next day there was another crime. But that’s another story. The end! 

Here is the picture our story was based on:

Who’s your favourite DC superhero?

Blog you later, Lusia